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Teen Poetry #5

When you come around

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2001-11-10 11:37 PM

When you come around,
I stare at your frown,
Wondering why you must frown,
I see you like this all the time,
I want to make it all better and sweet,
So I kiss you on the cheek,
A smile is what I seek,
I picture the world with just you and me,
We roam by ourselves through the land and sea,
I am in love but you are not,
Ill back away untill were not longer apart,
I love you dear,
Just want you to know,
You've got a smile that will kill anyones frown.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-11-12 09:52 AM

sweet words here Branden
hope things work out
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

2 posted 2001-11-12 09:59 AM

This is nice Branden. I like it

Sometimes the flow faltered a bit, but other then that, I like it a lot. Well done!

Sincerely,
Titus

"....this time I was mistaken for handing you a heart worth breaking." Nickelback

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

3 posted 2001-11-12 10:05 AM

nice

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2001-11-12 11:07 AM

ditto to kiley

welcome back brandon

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

5 posted 2001-11-12 10:48 PM

that's really sweet!

~*~Priscilla~*~

*Nous aimons et nous vivons*
*Nous vivons et nous aimons*

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-11-13 09:58 AM

what a sweet poem

good job branden!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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