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sweetstuff101
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0 posted 2001-11-10 09:32 PM


Return of a friend

Like a flame, blown out by the wind
You stormed out of my life
So quickly, I didn’t realize what was going on
The crushing blow went straight to my heart
I didn’t know how to cope with this
I was so young and juvenile
I sat up wishing every night
Wishing you would come back, so we could be friends again
Day by day, that dream faded as I realized what you had become
I hated you for what you said
For what you did
But down inside I still had a certain love for you
You were my shelter, my comfort, for so long
How could I forget that?
How could I abandon all that the way you did?
But now, now you have come back
Expecting my forgiveness
But I hesitate
I fear for what I don’t know
And I fear that you have changed
But you are still the same crazy girl I met so long ago
The one I missed over this unbearable time
But you created a void that could never be filled again
I will still be weary of you creeping behind me
Of you trying to tear me away from my one true love
The one I can’t have
Of you trying to separate me from my true friends
Of you dragging me down
But no matter how much I worry
Just know, you will always have a special place in my heart

*Nous aimons et nous vivons*
*Nous vivons et nous aimons*

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1 posted 2001-11-10 11:21 PM


It's so good to see you back here again  
I'm glad you decided to visit us
It's been a long time Priscilla
I see you are having problems with an old friend
I hope you solve your differences
welcome back  

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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2 posted 2001-11-11 01:01 AM


Very heartfelt and well done! I'm sorry things are confusing for you!

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TopGunLauren
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3 posted 2001-11-11 02:31 AM


Beautiful poem it's very heartfelt I love it you have a specialt talent keep up the great work.
  Lauren

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4 posted 2001-11-11 11:43 PM


It sounded as if you were speaking to a lost parent. Father who walked out perhaps. Or maybe just a friend... I dunno. I do know that I I liked this a lot...WELCOME BACK!!!  

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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5 posted 2001-11-13 01:36 PM


Nice to see ya here again!! i enjoyed this poem...i understand what your going through...nice job and keep on posting!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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6 posted 2001-11-13 08:26 PM


i like this alot !!!!
i call  my boyfriend sweetstuff...lol
anyways
i love this piece

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