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Hallucination
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0 posted 11-10-2001 09:26 PM       View Profile for Hallucination   Email Hallucination   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Hallucination

Black clouds, drops of rain,
hits my face like neatles.
Shadows, drives me insane,
I really don't need this.
I can't control it, it's gone too far,
just want this demon out of my heart.

The walls are closing in,
it gets harder to breathe.
Just as lost memories,
are builting up inside me.

Brick walls, closed window's,
everywhere that I turn.
Silense, rusty doors close's
in the dark two eyes burn.
I can't control it, it's gone too far,
just want this demon out of my heart.

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1 posted 11-13-2001 01:45 PM       View Profile for xShUgArHiGhx   Email xShUgArHiGhx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xShUgArHiGhx's Home Page   View IP for xShUgArHiGhx

This poem was extremely strong and very well written. You expressed your feelings nicely and i always enjoy dark poetry...nice job  

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Missthang
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2 posted 11-13-2001 05:50 PM       View Profile for Missthang   Email Missthang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Missthang's Home Page   View IP for Missthang

oooo, very entence! i got chills as i read this. good write.
ab

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
       -Thaddeus Golas

raiyne
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3 posted 04-24-2003 03:39 PM       View Profile for raiyne   Email raiyne   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for raiyne

i can feel where your coming from even though i can tell some parts came from a deep place.
 
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