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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-11-09 07:51 PM

Sadness as I know is hard
the love as I know it
is painful
Where are the warm embraces
The hugs on rainy days
Please don't leave me all alone
The friendships have vanished
the weight is gone
the pressure has increased
all because I love you
New friends and old friends
were all in the same boat
we all know sadness and anger
happiness and bitterness
come sweetly
come quietly
let me hold your hand
well make it together
hand in hand
we wont make it in anger
not in pain
not with new cuts
well only make it holding hands
friends forever....

Regina Levu 2001

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

1 posted 2001-11-09 07:54 PM

This was a really sweetly written poem. I enjoyed it very much.

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-11-09 08:09 PM

This is really very good!

I remember coming here a while ago and reading a poem from you, and I loved it, it made me remember your name actually. That was back before I ever joined of course but still I thought you left or something! And now I read this and I was like wow awesome! lol

well I really really love this poem and you have a lot of talent and I hope to see from you again in the future! ok!

bye Ina!

Theo

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

3 posted 2001-11-09 08:22 PM

very sweet and honest. seems like these are hard times however but you have a good person to help ya. good luck.

salma

Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-11-09 11:25 PM

Great poem Regina! Its good hearing from you again.

"The friendships have vanished
the weight is gone
the pressure has increased
all because I love you"

Those lines remind me of the exact thing that happened to me not long ago, you expressed it in a beautiful way.
Good Job

-C.M.

K. Rebel
Junior Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 40
San Juan, PR

5 posted 2001-11-09 11:31 PM

Wow! This is really shocking and deep, Regina you have a really easy way to take a villain's heart and make it a beautiful thing
Darn great job!

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

6 posted 2001-11-10 02:25 AM

come sweetly
come quietly
let me hold your hand
well make it together
hand in hand

Loved that it was absoloutely great!! thankz for writing this... i really really loved this poem

ALLIE

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-11-14 03:40 PM

"Where are the warm embraces
The hugs on rainy days
Please don't leave me all alone
The friendships have vanished"

*gives Ina a warm embrace, and a hug on a rainy day*

*gives Ina company*

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

8 posted 2001-11-14 04:44 PM

INA, That was BEAUTIFUL!!!!! (I really liked it, anyway....)

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

9 posted 2001-11-14 06:02 PM

Beautiful poem I really liked it keep up the great work.
Lauren

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

10 posted 2001-11-15 01:21 PM

Now that's what I'm talking about Regina! This one is great. Totally awesome. I really enjoyed it.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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