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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-11-09 10:19 AM

I tried so hard,
Wore out my heart.
Stripped away my shield,
To protect you from depressions dark.
Its not good enough,
It doesnt seem to protect you anymore.
Each time the sun rises in the morning,
The more pain you endure.
I cant save you from yourself,
I cant even save you from me.
You've hurt me too many times,
You just cant see.
You dont know what your saying,
You dont know how you act.
Nothing seems to be clear to you,
Your world is knocked off track.
Reality is titled,
Your world is upside down.
You've always relied on me,
To be the one around.
Well i have and always will,
You keep pushing me away.
You want me to make you better,
But u dont wanna be near me.
I never said i was perfect,
I never promised you the world.
Im not your guardian angel,
Just a normal girl.
Theres nothing more i can do for you,
I can just hold your hand.
Hoping that you will choose to help yourself,
And you'll one day understand.
It hurts to much to see you this way,
I think i need to just be alone.
I cant do this anymore,
So wont you please walk me home...

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-11-09 02:16 PM

I love how the last line wraps up the whole poem. It's very good. I enjoyed it alot.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

2 posted 2001-11-09 06:33 PM

I never said i was perfect,
I never promised you the world.
Im not your guardian angel,
Just a normal girl.

I especially liked this part!! This piece was really good, and I can relate to it so much. It sounds like this person is expecting way too much from you. Even if you love them, there's only so much you can provide. I hope that you are able to let them understand that. I also really liked the way you ended this piece. I enjoyed this poem alot. Good luck with your situation.

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-11-09 07:57 PM

Reality is titled....
That seemed like a very important line in the poem. Overall I really enjoyed this a lot, and the last line was awesome too.

Theo

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

4 posted 2001-11-09 09:37 PM

Awsome poem just like all you other poems I really liked it keep up the great work.
Lauren

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2001-11-09 11:08 PM

Awesome poetry Shugarh... And, I too loved the last line. I agree, this guy (?) is asking for way to much. Just give what you can and then know that's it. I hope this works out. Good luck!

Sincerely,
Titus

"....this time I was mistaken for handing you a heart worth breaking." Nickelback

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

6 posted 2001-11-10 12:27 PM

I liked this a lot. The title reminds me of that Mandy Moore song. But I liked this better

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

allie
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since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

7 posted 2001-11-10 02:20 AM

I never said i was perfect,
I never promised you the world.
Im not your guardian angel,
Just a normal girl.

Really loved these lines... the whole post was really great! loved this poem!!

Allie

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-11-13 09:48 AM

Thanks so much everyone..im really glad that you enjoyed it...its a tough situation but im just taking it one day at a time

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-11-13 09:58 AM

title reminds me of MM's song
Things will always end up falling into the right places
Think about what I just said

thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

10 posted 2001-11-14 01:30 AM

I love the way you expressed yourself here.

Dawn

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

11 posted 2001-11-14 01:57 PM

your writing is always a pleasure to read...i liked how you written this out...well done, Michele.

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