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Niksta
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since 2001-11-09
Posts 6
Australia

0 posted 2001-11-09 07:59 AM



There's this guy I know,
He's a little bit old.
I'm a little too young,
But I want him to hold.

I know I can't touch him,
It would be so wrong.
But I want to be with him,
I have for so long.

He tells me he wants me,
That I'm the only one.
He tells me he loves me,
Is it only for fun?

My mind is confused,
Unsure and undone.
My heart is so lost,
Where can I run?

I want him around me,
All of the time.
I can't stop thinking about him,
He's always on my mind.

I guess if its meant to be,
Fate will lead the way.
My feelings are set,
I have no more to say.

© Copyright 2001 Niksta - All Rights Reserved
Local Parasite
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Posts 2527
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1 posted 2001-11-09 08:52 AM


Don't let age get in the way of love!  You were only born once, what does it matter when that was?
Age means very little especially when you know you're in love with the person.
Welcome to Passions!  I liked this poem and I hope to see you in here more often too!

Theo

Acies
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Member Rara Avis
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Twilight Zone
2 posted 2001-11-09 09:44 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Thanks for deciding to join Passions for Poetry.  Hope you enjoy your stay here as we all do.  Happy reading and posting your own poems too.  Enjoy

Age can matter in a sense.  But it still depends on what ages you both are.  Maybe in the future things could happen between the both of you.  Don't hurry things, specially now that you are still so young as you have specified.


ps.  being your moderator, I would have sent you agreeting card, but you don't have a listed email  

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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3 posted 2001-11-09 09:57 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!

I really enjoyed your first post!! Dont let age get in the way of true love!!! I cant wait to read more from you so keep posting, welcome again!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Marshalzu
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4 posted 2001-11-09 11:36 AM


Welcome to passions and great first post, hope to see more of your work around here  

"The feelings are replaced, And the words have all decayed, But it's another day ,it's another day" - My Vitriol "The gentle art of choking"


keoni
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since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC
5 posted 2001-11-09 02:17 PM


Very good first post. Welcome to Passions. Hope to see more soon.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 495
East Haddam, CT
6 posted 2001-11-09 06:27 PM


If you truly love this person and they love you, age shouldn't be an obstacle.  I hope you're able to make this happen, even if it might seem wrong.  Good luck and welcome to passions!!!  

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

krystlebabe19
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since 2001-11-09
Posts 27

7 posted 2001-11-10 11:49 AM


I just wanted to say ILOVED YOUR POEM! I couldnt beleive how much I could relate to it .I have been in the same situation before. I just wanted to give u some advice I wish someone had given to me . If you love this guy then go for it. Age is just a number. Its not fair how in life people make you give up on things just because of how it may look. Beleive me do what your heart feels .You cant help who u fall in love with
allie
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since 2001-07-09
Posts 218
Australia
8 posted 2001-11-10 09:05 PM



My mind is confused,
Unsure and undone.
My heart is so lost,
Where can I run?

I loved this line Niksta, good to see some new members! if you need to talk about ne thing ive got msn silleallie@hotmail.com, great 1st post! hope to see you writing more often!

ALLIE

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9 posted 2001-11-28 04:25 AM


A wonderful poem indeed. Welcome to Passions. I think that if it was meant to be, it shall be. Nothing more or less can be said about that.
Good luck.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27
Posts 946
viginia
10 posted 2001-11-28 01:46 PM


welcome to passions, good first post, it had a lot of feeling in it.  i read all the if its meant to be it will comments, and i couldn't agree more.  however, when it comes to older guys, im always on the side of caution, ive just known too many of them.  anyway, keep posting and replying.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
11 posted 2001-11-28 05:01 PM


Great poem an' welcome to Passions. I'm sure you'll enjoy your stay. As for the content, I couldn't agree with dopey more. If it was meant to it shall be and age wont matter.

http://www.heisen.net Peace Through War, it is beginning!


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