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Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

0 posted 2001-11-08 12:19 PM

Hey everyone!! It's not one of my best but I had to get this out somehow. Tell me what you think

He approaches you as a friend
With you he jokes around,
And then one day he tells you
That your hearts are forever bound.

He springs this news upon you
And you are left in shock,
Your confused on what to do
Because your boat he's rocked.

Then one night he appears
And his lips meet yours,
Now he says he's feelings have changed
And that he likes you even more.

But just as you open up
And you give your heart away,
He decides to change his mind
And now he doesn't want to stay

Now you are hurt and frustraighted
On why he said those things,
Why his mind has changed
And all the confusion that he brings.

He asks you in a note
If he has wasted his time,
Since when did I become a waste??
His love should be a crime.

Now he reilises that your hurt
And once again he'll change his mind,
He claims he likes you even more now
Now he wants to be kind.

But what will he feel later?
In two days, a month or a week,
Will he still be around?
Or will he be kissing someone elses cheek.

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-11-08 12:25 PM

Ah yes, the classic chaotic boyfriend situation. Gotta love it, no matter how hard you try not to.
As for the poem, it wasn't as bad as you made it out to be. It's good to get these things out.

Theo

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

2 posted 2001-11-08 12:31 PM

This is very good. Thanks for sharing.

Dawn

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-11-08 09:08 AM

Oi. Well, I hear ya.

Sometimes love sucks...and boys suck, too. They should be locked up for a bit with big birtha mwhahaha!

this was good though and I hope your stich gets better.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-11-08 05:02 PM

sad things MEN-(minus)alby(ME), do...huh?

"But what will he feel later?
In two days, a month or a week,
Will he still be around?
Or will he be kissing someone elses cheek."

this is real as well...so many take hearts as plastic spoons(bad camparion, i know)

but yea...hope all will get better, and one perfect guy you'll meet.

=)

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

5 posted 2001-11-08 05:14 PM

Yeah love should definitely be illegal, considering the pain you always end up feeling in the end is worse than any punishment. And the guys that cause this kinda pain should be locked up 4ever!!! I liked this one alot, and I think you did a really nice job. There are a couple spots that don't flow quite right, but that could easily be fixed. Good luck!

~Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

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