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Another stolen heart
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Another stolen heart |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
over and over again, these emotions keep coming back. why can't they just leave me alone, why can't they cut me some slack? I don't need this in my life, I don't want to have to deal. 'cuz I know you'll go and play, and another heart you'll steal. So look me in the eye, say you don't love me, just say goodbye, justleave me alone, let me be.... i'm not really proud of this one but i had 2 get it out so here it is... ugh, my life is like a soap opera, everyday something new comes along and makes it 10x worse |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Sad but very powerful poem I like it a lot and I'm glad you posted it.Keep up the great work and I hope things get better for you. Lauren |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
It wasn't such a bad poem, it gets the point across.  Glad you could release your emotions in such a way.Theo |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
"and another heart you'll steal" I have to say that's my favorite line. Nice poem. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks 4 the replies, i'm glad u liked it, but it wasnt my best . o well, thanks again  ugh, my life is like a soap opera, everyday something new comes along and makes it 10x worse |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Awww this makes me want 2 cry..It would be so much easier to be happy if ppl wouldn't screw around with your heart and emotions, huh? I know the feeling. I hope things get better 4 u... ~*Nikki*~ ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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