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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
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Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2001-11-07 02:44 PM



The tears of joy, love, and mirth
All shared upon the birth
Of revealing a soul.
To sit and hear your goal
To reach out and touch the stars

And have the soul reply:
Upon the wings of a dragon fly.
Now your sure this soul
Is sharing your dreams and goals
your two threads are now woven together

The feathery secrets
Between you two now murmured
How excitedly you two whispered
Of this newfound relationship
Buried under heavy ground

Suddenly your eyes open wide
So relieved you could have cried
The soul i found was yours,
Refreshed and found anew
After all those years,
Locked behind closed doors.

Returning to you,
The hope and bliss you once knew


to my friend Jenn

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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DawnG
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1 posted 2001-11-07 05:46 PM


This is beautiful. Jenn will love it, I am sure.
Local Parasite
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2 posted 2001-11-07 07:30 PM


I like this better than your other one, it was written more skillfully.  
I, too, hope your friend Jenn appreciates it.

Theo

DancinQueen
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3 posted 2001-11-07 10:06 PM


oh my goodness! ure back!! ure ancient like me lol i haven't talked to you for like 500 years. i dunno if you even remember me. always always loved your poetry, and im so glad youre back. wonderful post  

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2001-11-08 12:39 PM


Welcome back Jeremiah.  
Your friend Jenn eh? Well I dare not assume it's me since my name is common...but would you mind explaining the poem's meaning to me anyway? Nice to see you back here.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
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East Haddam, CT
5 posted 2001-11-09 07:46 PM


This is so raw and beautiful, I loved it! Great work!  

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

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