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baby0508
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

0 posted 2001-11-07 01:15 PM

Mind Games

Mess with my head a little more
because the pain you'll never see
Continue to rip my heart in shreds
and cause me misery.

Watch every tear fall off my face
and act like your confused.
Pretend that you can't see
How my kindness you've abused.

Play with my emotions like their nothing
Mess with them constantly
Pretend that they don't exhist
Continue hurting me.

Do you like it when I cry
When there's no smile upon my face?
Does it please you just to know
That a tear now takes its place?

Do you love to cause me pain?
And play with my fraigle heart?
How about you break it all you'd like,
Just rip it all apart.

You're gonna wish you never did this
Never played this little game
Cause now it's turned upon you,
And you're the one to blame.

Now I've turned your game around,
So this is what you do.
And now your heartless mind games,
Are only hurting YOU!!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-11-07 01:35 PM

Ooooooo revenge is sweet!!! He definately deserves a taste of his own medicine and even worse for what he did to u!!!! UGH!!!! GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

2 posted 2001-11-07 02:02 PM

Hey Heather,
I like the last stanza of this poem the best because, unlike most of your others, it shows that you're not gonna just sit back and let him hurt you. Sometimes you gotta show ppl that you're stronger than they think you are. Don't let him keep on doing this 2 u.

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

3 posted 2001-11-07 05:31 PM

Heather,

*sigh* Someday I will follow your advice.

Dawn

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

4 posted 2001-11-07 05:51 PM

You did a very good job with the meter in this. It flowed wonderfully as far as I saw. Good write, and good luck, just don't do too much damage, teehee.
~Ali

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. Jatdore.

Missthang
Member

since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

5 posted 2001-11-07 06:07 PM

I really liked the way you got your feelings across. Very well done. I felt the hurt that you are feeling.. revenge is sweet!!!!

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

6 posted 2001-11-07 07:51 PM

People say revenge isn't the way to solve probles but in some cases like yours I think it was.But anyway great poem I could relate to it so keep up the great work.
Lauren

Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

7 posted 2001-11-08 12:27 PM

All I can say is wow!!! This was totally awesome, it's so going in my library!

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

8 posted 2001-11-08 09:36 AM

haeth this is sooooo good. like all ur poems. i really dont think he is the best thing 4 u but if he makes u happy....ur good.
~britt~

baby0508
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

9 posted 2001-11-14 01:17 PM

I'm glad that you guys liked this poem. although it was pretty sad i felt that it really expressed my emotions as well as what others feel in the same situation.
heather

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