Wonderful poem. Aside from a few typos, i thought I would point out to you: "from an emt sky" "I know see that onely star" and I'm not sure if you ment for it to be like this but "so that it may longer be" not sure if you forgot a word or not, but all in all, a wonderful work.
Curious, so curious
what can i say....another great one!indeed i feel like a lonestar as well.i feel like the light is dimmed but ready to burst forth yet,hinderances linger.i feel an inspiration to write such a poem right now...lovely one lonewolf!
Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved.