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just_me
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since 2001-10-24
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0 posted 2001-11-05 09:17 PM




Little did I know
that a month ago
We wouldnt be
this close of friends

But a lot has changed
in the past month
To make me see
That there will be no end

We share our thoughts
our dreams, our hopes
wanting to make
each our own

A stare, a look
call it what you want
even in your voice
when we're on the phone

A little hello
a wink or a smile
everything about you
makes me jump with joy

As everyone says
I now have a glow
just like a kid
opening a  new toy

All of this because
of one little thing
something so small
and out of the blue

that makes me feel
so big and so free
and all of this
just because of you


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1 posted 2001-11-05 10:32 PM


Nice poem.  Good work on it.
I'm happy for you, that you have found what you have.

Theo

DawnG
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2 posted 2001-11-05 11:34 PM


Just me,

This is a very beautiful poem. It's so nice when the unexpected happens, esp when that unexpected is making a friend. This is a great poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.

                                  Dawn

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3 posted 2001-11-06 01:10 AM


Aw! That's so cute and sweet! Well done on this one!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

DancinQueen
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4 posted 2001-11-06 04:16 PM


twins im tellin ya~goin through this with my bestfriend. Except I'm just not sure I can let myself let go with him. ya know?? but im glad everything is working out for you   keep posting..lets see what else we have in common  

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Missthang
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5 posted 2001-11-06 11:41 PM


i think it's awesome that you are writing your emotions out, and that you have so much "constructive" stuff to say :-P but seriously though, this poem was good. and no matter how much of a baby i was during your "glowing" phase, or how negative i may have seemed toward you, ya gotta believe me, i was soooooo happy for you. i live to see you smile :-) keep up the good writing.
-adamma

*The heart is a house for love*

Missthang
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6 posted 2001-11-06 11:43 PM


i think it's awesome that you are writing your emotions out, and that you have so much "constructive" stuff to say :-P but seriously though, this poem was good. and no matter how much of a baby i was during your "glowing" phase, or how negative i may have seemed toward you, ya gotta believe me, i was soooooo happy for you. i live to see you smile :-) keep up the good writing.
-adamma

*The heart is a house for love*

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7 posted 2001-11-07 01:31 PM


Great poem!! This person sounds great   Its nice to find people like this in our life..maybe think about sharing it with them!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymousfemale
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8 posted 2001-12-07 08:45 AM


Lovely.  
I hope you hold onto this person for a very long time. Keep smiling!  

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.



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