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just_me
Junior Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 19

0 posted 2001-11-05 07:07 PM

I'm hurting so bad
But I can't let it show
Even though he caused this pain
I could never let him know

I thought he was different
I thought he cared
I fell for his smile
his eyes and his hair

We sat around talking
sharing all our weird stories
But little did I know
That was the end of the glory

I thought we connected
I thought this was special
If only I had been
A little more careful

I fell really hard
Putting my heart on the line
Only to hear those famous words
"Thats not what I had in mind"

And now things are different
Even though he said its not
It's hard for me to be this way
Because I can't have what I want

Greeneyes7
Junior Member

since 2001-11-05

Posts 16
Illinois

1 posted 2001-11-05 07:35 PM

Oh I so know how you feel. My heart pounds just thinking about it. It's hard. But of course matters of the heart always are. I hope everything turns out for you. Just remember that a friendship is worth the work. I know it's weird now but soon you won't even remember what happened. I'm always here to talk. Good luck. Thanks for sharing.

Life is what you make it. Live each day as if it was your last.

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-11-05 08:24 PM

Well it looks like you're in a sticky spot. Good luck with it.
Fine poem, too.

Theo

Missthang
Member

since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

3 posted 2001-11-05 10:27 PM

girly~
this is truly one of your best works!! i really really liked it, even if you wrote it in speech class :-P like, every single word was just as powerful as the next! I FEEL YOUR PAIN! then again true friends are forever, and even though he caused a lot of pain i think it's beyond AWESOME that you guys are still friends.
-adamma

*The heart is a house for love*

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

4 posted 2001-11-05 11:40 PM

Just me,

Hi. It's just me again.

I am really enjoying your writing. I know exactly what you are talking about here. I am going through the exact same thing right now. I hope things work out for you.

Dawn

Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

5 posted 2001-11-05 11:43 PM

This one hit close to home, It was a really good write

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2001-11-06 01:12 AM

Aw, that's so sad!

if you ever need to talk, my email's spacebear_15@hotmail.com

I'll always listen!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

7 posted 2001-11-06 04:09 PM

aww man! Hello we're living identical lives! Doesn't it make you SOO mad to know that what youve wanted was there, and you felt it, and it was sooo great...and then it wasn't even real?!? I just did this. Found a great guy, and he was like everything i was looking for, and i mean everything. And I had never been so happy w/ a guy, then come to find out it was all an act, sorta a bet with a friend. Pisses me off that I'm so picky and i finally found what ive been looking for and it wasn't even real. UGH! Just scream with me it will be fun..

Newho..woo i got off on a tangent huh. great poem tho

you ever need to whine about what jerks guys can be, feel free to email me

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

8 posted 2001-11-06 04:12 PM

oh oh..and about the part about getting caught up in his smile, his eyes and his hair...O0ooOo0o...girl dont even get me started! its the darn'd smile that gets me everytime. But my guy chopped his curly hair, so atleast i'm down to his eyes and his smile

maybe he'll get punched in the face and it'll knock some teeth out..one can only pray

lol

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

9 posted 2001-11-07 01:42 PM

What a sucky situation...unfortunately these things DO happen..i completely feel for what your going through hun ::hugs:: Nice job on the poem , i think you expressed urself nicely

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

10 posted 2001-11-07 01:55 PM

Wow, this could have been written about me!! I definitely know what you're going through, and "hurting" is just the way I would describe it. Be careful who you trust. It's always the guys who seem the sweetest that end up breaking your heart. Although I'm sure you feel like **** now, at least you'll know to be more careful next time. I feel 4 u.

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

krystlebabe19
Junior Member

since 2001-11-09

Posts 27

11 posted 2001-11-10 09:23 PM

I really loved this poem. I could really relate to it. But dont ever give up on love , not every guy is like that . Y ou will find a great guy some day who makes you incredibly happy!

~*Krystle*~

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