San Juan, Puerto Rico
Amazing job!! I really think you have a talent. I didn't like the flow because you come off with awesome flow the first two verses of each stanza, and break off into shorter syllable counts the 3rd and 5th verses. I understand, this is a style, but not one I fancy. Anyhow, that is an OPINION. As far as the poem itself goes, the style, you wrote it well. You complied with it rather justifiably and I hope to read your work more often....I find time to be challenging to spare lately, sorry.
ANyhow, well done.
I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.
Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you