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K. Rebel
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since 2001-10-21
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San Juan, PR

0 posted 2001-11-05 05:14 PM


If I am to wait for you,
In my sorrow and my loss,
Alongside of loneliness,
I will grow only within you.

I shall not cease this love,
While I wait by the side
Of my endless boredom,
For your beautiful love
To, once again, take over me.

I await the moment I can again,
Hide myself within your heart,
And find happiness
In your infinite beauty.


© Copyright 2001 Danny Brown - All Rights Reserved
Knight of Secrecy
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1 posted 2001-11-05 05:24 PM


woah! Deja Vu!, this is not bad danny, especially when I know  the story( i think?)
Good luck!

-C.M.

DawnG
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2 posted 2001-11-06 12:22 PM


I hope you can find love again.

                                 Dawn

DancinQueen
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3 posted 2001-11-06 12:48 PM


awww this was beautiful. especially liked the last stanza. great job  

*dq

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Skyfire
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4 posted 2001-11-06 01:20 AM


Great job! The format kind of threw me, but once I got it, I saw that it's a great one!

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