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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
resurrect the past let the future stand strong in a place where I no know I belong is it time for me to carry on or is it time for me to say I'm gone my past now present right in my face I'm sorry, but I need grace I can't make it on my own I just want to go home well I don't know what's going on and I don't know when I'm done well I don't know what's going on but I know this is no fun time and again I see you standing there time and again I wonder why you care my body trembles at your sight my eyes blinded by the gleaming light I don't to say or to do but I know my heart longs for you my inner being aches in pain please tell me I'm not insane well I don't know what's going on and I don't know when I'm done well I don't what's going on but I this is no fun seperation from you is so dim I search and seek and all I see is him I'm wondring why it hurts so very bad why this feeling just drives me mad no I don't know no I don't know no I don't know WHY |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
I liked it thought it's pretty sad, I liked the rhyme it had to it because I could hear the music it my head while reading it (being a song and all). Anyways good post, keep it up  I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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