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Teen Poetry #5

voice in my head

lil_pwheeler
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since 2001-07-14

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0 posted 2001-11-04 08:50 PM

Isnt it about time
You listened to that voice back in your head
The one that kept you alive
When you where alomost dead

When you dont know whether to go left or right
It tells you where to go
It helps you make the right decisions
When you're lost and just don't know

Its happy when you're sad
Its there when you're away
It helps put the right words in your mouth
When you don't know what to say

When I couldn't ask her
He did it right away
When I couldnt hold back the tears
He said that its okay

No one dies a virgin, life screws us all

Le Capitan de L'Amour
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since 2000-07-15

Posts 60

1 posted 2001-11-04 09:38 PM

Hey, not bad!at all.Keep it up.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
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2 posted 2001-11-04 10:05 PM

Hey I really like this one! It took me a couple read-throughs to understand it, but when I DID get it, I said to myself, 'wow!'. Thanks for sharing...

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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-11-05 01:44 PM

What a terrific point!!! I should definately listen to the voice in my head...i tend to try and shut it up but it really does do miracles..interesting topic and wonderful poem!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Honey
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since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
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4 posted 2001-11-05 11:55 PM

Lol everyone has always told me to do what the little voices inside my head told me too... hehe if i did i would get into a lot of troublw :P anyway great write

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

5 posted 2001-11-06 01:19 PM

Lil_pwheeler,

Most of the time that little voice in the back of your head is a very good thing to listen to.

Dawn

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