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Le Capitan de L'Amour
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0 posted 2001-11-04 08:37 PM



   Love like a thousand roses are the reason to live for "I thought!", but like the petals it just goes by. Sought then I thought to have a thousand roses for myself, I treated them good, but when fall came they all died and with each petal of love that fell I cried for the love I had lost again, but you the one of those thousand roses survived to give me the nectar I needed to live on, because I rather die than to live without your love!.  

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1 posted 2001-11-04 08:39 PM


Your poem is very sweet I liked it keep up the great work!
  Lauren

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2 posted 2001-11-04 09:59 PM


Very impressive! I like your use of the rose petals for imagery here!

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3 posted 2001-11-05 01:37 PM


I enjoyed how you used the rose petals as imagery here as well...nice piece...

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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