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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
with all this suffering, and all this pain, my feelings for you, were felt in vain. what they told me, I just couldn't believe, how could you cheat? how could you decieve? you broke my heart, when you said goodbye, you left without a care, didn't even stop to wonder why....... ugh, my life is like a soap opera, everyday something new comes along and makes it 10x worse |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
I like this, the fact that you didn't drag it out really added something to it. Good write, thanks for sharing. Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
you broke my heart, when you said goodbye, you left without a care, didn't even stop to wonder why....... Oh way to make me feel guilty! Great job though, very heartfelt... I am truly sorry you had this happen! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Hmmm.. I felt like it stopped abrubtly (Sp?)....Yet, it worked well like that...Odd.. Anywho- Enjoyed the write muchos! Flowed nicely and captivated alot of hurt and begrudged feelings.  Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow Great job on this one!! I really felt this one....i liked it a lot!! keep it up!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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