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Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2001-11-03 06:03 PM

Oh, muse
Do tell me
Of the time
Long ago
When we were
Fresh and young
With no
Sorrow in
Our hearts
And our
Eyes werent
Old and tired
Oh, muse
Please tell me
When we
Were alive
And life
Was all new
Oh, muse
I must know

I wrote this at five this morning, because of a dream I had. I hope you understand it....

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2001-11-03 10:24 PM

I sort of understand it, but not really, but you know what? That's perfectly fine! It was a great read anyway! Thanks for sharing!

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AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

2 posted 2001-11-03 10:46 PM

Lol, I must agree. I partially understand it, but for something written at 5 in the morning, this makes great sense, lol. Good write all the same.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-11-05 02:01 PM

This has deeper meaning than my tired mind at 2 o'clock in the afternoon can understand...please forgive me but i truely did appreciate the poem!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-11-05 05:11 PM

I'm sighing. Writing poetry used to be a lot easier. If your old muse breaks, get a new one.
I'm done sighing now.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-11-05 06:13 PM

the desperate tone was enchanced in my opinion with the short verses(2/3 sybl)...went well together...i liked it.

=)

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

6 posted 2001-11-06 12:13 PM

I hope you haven't lost your muse. Iliked this, if I did in fact understand it. If not, I would love to be enlightened.

Dawn

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

7 posted 2001-11-06 10:52 AM

Aww. Yeah, I truely believe that you never lose your muse. Simply misplace it in all of your mind clutter. Wait it out

Nice poem.
Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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