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AngelPoet87
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0 posted 2001-11-02 06:23 PM

For his is the light that guides
my soul as I search and plod,
I am the only that can see
he has walked where angels trod.

For his is the voice that I hear
calling my name in my dreams,
his presence is my only comfort
when nothing is what it seems.

For his is the touch I seek
when the stars shine in the sky,
the gentleness he possesses
is one I could never deny.

For his is the comfort sent
when my world falls apart,
he picks up all the pieces
and makes a brand new start.

For his is the name I say
when I count aloud my blessings,
for he has mended my heart
with care and gentle dressings.

For his is the Love I treasure
more than my life itself,
for my sun rises and sets
as he says he loves me himself.

For his is the hand I'll take
and pledge my undying love,
for he is the one I will marry
and become forever a part of.

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel.

© Copyright 2001 Alicia Morris - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2001-11-03 01:25 AM

Aww, that's sweet, Alicia! I'm very impressed with the way you kept your flow going throughout the entire poem! Way to go!

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allie
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2 posted 2001-11-03 09:03 AM

thats really really sweet, enjoyed that one!

Allie

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3 posted 2001-11-03 02:17 PM

I really liked the repitition and the flow you used, the way it's written is much to my liking

And I like what it has to say as well, so nice job on this poem!!

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4 posted 2001-11-03 03:36 PM

Woo! You rock Ali....Alex'll love this.

-Adam

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5 posted 2001-11-03 05:24 PM

i like this one soooo much. it describes how i feel about my boyfriend!!!! great write.

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IM ENGAGED!!!!!

6 posted 2001-11-03 05:51 PM

This is the poem i wanted to write!LOL
i lov eit!

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