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keoni
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0 posted 2001-11-02 02:20 PM


I’ve got to hand it to the kings of fashion.
Just a piece of clothes can cause a chain reaction
Be a good consumer and shop till you drop
Be a good conformist and join the flock
Be a good man and buy your woman some jewels
Be a good parent, shop for back to school
To hell with being good I say screw the rules

Hilfiger and Versace are just not me
Don’t buy Polo or Gucci guess I’m just too cheap
I wear what I wear only for me
Don’t gotta buy what I see just cause it’s on TV
Cause I won’t buy into your hypocrisy

New shoes, new pants, with the shirt to match
I need to free myself, become unattached
From the belief that who you are is based on how you dress
It’s just another thing in life that causes stress
Yeah, you’re cool, the brands you wear are designer
But they were made in the third world by some poor minor
Sitting in a sweatshop making a quarter a day
Working 15 hours for almost no pay
Your clothes are made by a man in the Philippines
He has no choice, his head’s in the guillotine
Either work or die, starve or get by
It don’t happen in the US cause this crap don’t fly
So they keep the labor cheap and make the prices high

Reebok and Nike, Don’t want to be just like Mikey
Just Do It, say screw it, and stand right beside me
I wear what I wear only for me
Don’t gotta buy what I see just cause it’s on TV
Cause I won’t buy into your hypocrisy

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bo

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Knight of Secrecy
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1 posted 2001-11-02 02:34 PM


Damn! great poem! Straight up  no apologies in this one. Good one.

-C.M.

Knight of Secrecy
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2 posted 2001-11-02 02:34 PM


Damn! great poem! Straight up  no apologies in this one. Good one.

-C.M.

sorry posted, nervous tick posted it twice

[This message has been edited by Knight of Secrecy (edited 11-02-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-11-02 04:18 PM


Wow!!! Awesome poem!!! I'm really impressed with this one! Going into the library definately!!

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AngelPoet87
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Indy
4 posted 2001-11-02 06:04 PM


This is great, love the way you got the message across.
Salooma
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5 posted 2001-11-02 07:50 PM


loved that!
really a great piece....very nice work.
I loved how you got the message straight across and so vividly!

Salma  

Spice
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since 2001-04-13
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6 posted 2001-11-03 12:39 PM


Damn Job!  
A a kick arse poem!
Loved the line at the end "Just do it, say screw it.." (Figures, right? LOL)

ANYWAY...I, Myseld, am a conformer...Can't help it...I like the trendy clothes..lol..
Not a big "Name brand" kinda person though...ANYWAY...(again) Awesome write. You rule. Loved the attitude/tone of this...

Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth...

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