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Eternity (An Attempt)
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Eternity (An Attempt) |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Well, after reading some more of shakespears works, i decided i would try out my own kind of shakesperic poem. So here it goes: Titled: Eternity Your captive may i be, from now until my life does part. The key to my heart, of which you posess, soothed by your love. To the stars shall i glance, but your beauty dost them shame. With sorrow did you, leave; The fire of loneliness, to descend upon myself. My soul moans to my, unyielding heart, how selfish could i be, for desireing your return from, eternity. (Copyright - Dreys Vasnook, 2001) -Dreys "Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!" |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very Cool poem, great job man. -C.M. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ahhh Shakespeare is great isn't he? I liked this it was a good attempt at a new style. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I don't normally like Shakespearean-type poems, but this one wasn't bad at all! Keep trying it out, I think the style suits you! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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