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Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-11-01 05:58 PM

It’s twelve twenty-two AM tonight,
And I can’t seem to rest,
‘Cause everytime I close my eyes,
I’m reminded of how I’m blessed.

A heavenly angel holds my heart,
And she fears that it might fall,
If only I could make her see,
That I don’t fear the plunge at all.

That heart’s been dropped many times,
But it always stands again,
If only I could make her feel,
The undying love within.

A heavenly princess holds my heart,
And though I’ve got no rose to give,
I pray...no, beg,
That she might let those feelings live.

"Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2001-11-01 07:52 PM

Be patient. She will come around for you.

Nice one.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-11-01 09:42 PM

i agree with jenn adamz...she'll come around- youre so goood to her..she'll come around

loved the poem- it was simple but really sweet...( must be in love.....

)....nice write poet!

"......",said the wise mute.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-11-02 01:15 AM

I agree with both of them!!! She WILL come around! Eventually!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-11-02 11:33 AM

How come everyones already said what i wanted to say!? THATS NOT FAIR!!!!! Hmph!!!*<*<**>*>*

AMAZING JOB!!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-11-02 01:06 PM

First off, the title drew me in.
Second off, wonderful poem. You did this wonderfully. Great job here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

6 posted 2001-11-02 06:17 PM

*puts hands together and bats eye lashes mockingly* Ooo clarissa smoochy smoochy teeheehee, great write adam, as always. This one is really sweet, its great to see you writing something thats not dark, because you've got great abilities here too. Thats one thing good thats coming out of your obsession. Teehee.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2001-11-03 02:13 PM

The title caught my attention too and i really like the writing in this. Nice writing!

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

8 posted 2001-11-03 06:05 PM

*claps* very nice

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