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Long awaited wrath |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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All the words I have spoken were to a man I thought you were. So therefore, I take them back. Having lost all meaning. I've looked inside unleashed a spitfire from deep within My hatred- this infinite blue flame. Your ignorance has tied me down for long enough. And now, with sound mind, and clear vision, I'll speak to you, one final time. Wet your lips, and prepare yourself, to kiss goodbye... what you never deserved. heh...  |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Wow. Not bad... Titus "Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ooooh...man did i feel the anger or did i feel the anger in this piece?...  a job very well done jenn at portraying your emotions! good stuff girly!i hope things get better for you soon!  |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks to both of you. On the contrary Cherish...things are just begining to become clear again.  Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Ooh, ouch! I'm really glad things are becoming clearer for you!!! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Ooooo I heard that! You go girl! I really like this, it flowed rather smoothly. I know the feeling, too. Great write. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks Skyfire and Angel... I've been so busy I've had zero time to write. But this just kind of came to me. Something I've been needing to come to terms with I suppose.  Thanks again. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is a great write Jenn I hope you are ok *hugs* thanks for the read "The feelings are replaced, And the words have all decayed, But it's another day ,it's another day" - My Vitriol "The gentle art of choking" |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
*Pinches herslef* JENN!!! *Bows down and kisses your feet* You are awesome, this poem was spectacular! *Click* In the library it goes! I know EXACTLY how you feel in this one, and the anger made the poem 10,000 times stronger and more gripping. Wow...Kudos to you, deary...you have blown me away! Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks Andrew. *hugs* I'm ok.... much more in tune with reality actually  Jesa! Thanks for the praise girl, you are embarrassing me!!!  I like anger. It is nice.  "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you go girl là où est mon amour? |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
 ...awesome...talk about kick arse...long live JENN! lol.=) |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a really good poem. Dawn |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
lol i was thinking for an ending..the wet your lips part..then a kiss goodbye, let me bend over! haha thatd woulda been cute. but ooo this makes me feel like i have power over the jerks! good self-esteem poem oooh..and i love your sweet little innocent picture next to a post like this! HA! **You can't always trust the people you want to** [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Wow, this was really strong!! I liked the power that I felt behind your words!! I wish I could be like that!! ~*Nikki*~ ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
"All the words I have spoken were to a man I thought you were." I loved that line!!! great poem ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Acire- HAHA thanks  Alby- Thanks hon, and dang straight!! Long live me Dawn- Thank you for you comments. Much appreciated.Kiley- KILEY!! OMG you fruit!! LOL that would be kind of funny tho. Maybe you should use it as one of your endings. Oh and the pic...yeah, aren't I just so sweet? Slash not at all!! Thanks for reading!Nikki- I wish I were stronger sometimes. But occasionally you realize it's now or never and you realize you need to get a grip and kick some butt Thanks for replying.Shugar- Thank you. Those are prolly the most emotional, least evil words in the whole poem I'm glad you liked. "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
a very good poem Jenn. I enjoyed it alot I haven't been on in awhile so i figured i'd check u out. enjoyed much thanks for posting p.s i was thinking about calling u would u mind? I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
BOOYA JENN!!!!! WOW! This is such a strong piece, Chicka! These sorts of things are what I have missed. Keep your head up and I am now here to talk again so go for your life. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
WOW!! Jenn... you told him! I seriously wish I had that amount of courage to confront someone in such a way... wow. This was awesome, and the ending really pulled the power out of it. VERY nice work!! I have really been enjoying your work since I've been back. You've improved such an immense amount, it's a pleasure reading your work. Very talented! Fantastic job with this one. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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