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Flurries: A collection
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Flurries: A collection |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Ignite the sky with open flames As midnight hides behind the stars Our souls we keep, our hearts we tame. + + + Snow falls gently, swiftly down Upon a silent, sleeping town Shimmering lace upon her gown And silver gold upon her crown. + + + One solitary voice sings soft upon the wind Softly, it rides on the magic within. Surrounded by echos that forever were lost A passion regained, whatever the cost. + + + Golden slumbers drifting Like falling leaves of laughter Upon the crimson shifting Shower down on me... + + + + + Something a little different. 4 different poems highlighting different styles, as well as forms (one of them, I made up because, you know...kinda needed that extra boost of creativity). I actually wrote these according to the many definitions of flurries... Poem 1: A sudden burst or commotion Poem 2: A brief, light snowfall Poem 3: A sudden gust of wind Poem 4: A stirring mass, as of leaves or dust; a shower. Hope you enjoy it! ^__^ ++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 11-01-2001).] |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!! *slurps her Mc Flurrie*...yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum! hey you know what?..youre the best! i really liked these four individual poems HEAPS!. i mean they way you talked about the same thing but different parts of it, and then linking them together with the form ( i was thinking of doing the same thing- but now you beat me to it its scraped lol )....you did an awesome job of this leah...i envy your brain! |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You know, even though these were four different poems, they all went together quite well. I don't know what I'm saying, but good job!! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great One!, very cool poem. -C.M. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Beautifully written!!! Great job!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
~*Bump*~ ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, Super coolio job on these!! It's a great idea and you did a great job on working with it  "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work on these poem Leah, I am in awe... thank you for sharing this marvellous read with us "The feelings are replaced, And the words have all decayed, But it's another day ,it's another day" - My Vitriol "The gentle art of choking" |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
This absolutly rocked *clicks library button before she forgets*. Awesome job, the idea of playing with the different defenitions and writing styles was just wonderful. Thanks alot for the read. Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
WoO! I liked this tons Leah. I especially like how each one corresponds with a definition of Flurry. -Adam "Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Hey, I'm sorry, but this one kinda went over my head(note:I'm typing this at 1:30 am so don't do me no favors) But from what I could get from it was good and solid. "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Very cool, Leah. This just shows how talented you are to write about four different scenarios in four different formats. It's creativity to the max! The first one is my favourite. A lot of truth in it. That's more than likely why. Keep writing!! ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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