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Friendship Has No Fee
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Friendship Has No Fee |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
I'll hold you close when you cry I'll wipe away your tears, When the whole world turns there back I'll be here to calm your fears. No matter what day or night Call on me and I'll be there, I'll always lend my ear to you So your feelings you can share Your my friend no matter what I don't care what others say, They don't know how they're missin out Because your here for me come what may. Guys will come and guys will go And some will break your heart, But no matter what I'm here to stay Unlike them I wont depart. So If you did not know I'm here, Now you surely do, I'll be here through thick and thin And I know you will be too. So as the years go rushing by Best friends is what we'll be, And dont ever ask to pay me back For friendship has no fee. It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
And dont ever ask to pay me back For friendship has no fee. Wow. Such a great poem! Make sure you give this to your friend, kay? Keep up the awesome work! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I loved this. Friends like this are worth their weight in gold.  Great work.Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You truely sound like an absolutely amazing friend...anyone would be lucky to have you as a friend Very sweet poem...i liked it!!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
im so impressed......its a wonderful poem!!! great work! Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*Bump* I think it's too sweet to fall! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
*SITS WITH JAW DROPPED* Such a beautiful description and such feeling. I love the acceptance and security you portray. I recently wrote one about friendship which I dedicated to one of my best friends (I'm moving, I wanted to reassure we'd always remain best of friends.) So, I relate. Loved it! One of the best I've read the past coupla days. Oh, and I realized something... "Guys will come and guys will go And some will break your heart, But no matter what I'm here to stay Unlike them I wont depart." If a guy was gay, this would still work for him! Just thought that was humurous! I'm not gay, but I accept anything. LoL. Anyways... keep it up. Sincerely, Titus "Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it. I thought it was nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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