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the_rescue
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0 posted 2001-10-30 06:12 PM



Silence yourself the words hurt to much
there was a time I didn't cring with your touch
silence yourself your eyes cut like a knife
now even your very breath seems to destroy life
Silence yourself those happy little dreams
cause your reality is torn at the seams
Silence yourself in your self ambitious state
don't think of us or our untimely fate
Silence yourself I don't want to hear you talk
cause all you are is talk you can't even walk
Silence yourself cause your annoying me to death
my body trembles with the sound of your breath
Silence yourself don't you see what you do
all the "little" things you put me through
Silence yourself I'm over your stupid mind game
I just wish sometimes I didn't know your name
Silence yourself you've killed me already
with your knife in your hand held so steady
Silence yourself cause it's you I can't stand
and now I silence myself cause this poem is about me don't you understand.

we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us

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1 posted 2001-10-31 12:16 PM


I don't know what to say about this one! Great poem, so full of pain and hurt (duh, right?)... I just... like it!

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2 posted 2001-10-31 08:38 AM


Wow. Pure anger here. It reminds me of "Don't Speak" by No Doubt. A little harsher tho I think.  

Jenn

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3 posted 2001-10-31 10:02 AM


This one was definately chock-full-of-anger...it was a great read!! Full of emotion...well done!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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