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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419


0 posted 2001-10-30 12:10 PM


" I'm Sorry "
Verse:
How could I be so blind,
not to see that we're falling apart
why couldn't I find
the love within my heart.

Why did you have to leave
before I realized
how much you meant to me.

Chorus:
I'm sorry, so sorry
I Apoligize
didn't mean to hurt you.
I'm sorry, so sorry
for all my lies
didn't mean to hurt you.

Verse:
I miss you beautiful smile,
and the way we used to be,
every time I cried,
you always comfort me.

The look in your eyes,
kept the rain from falling,
you'er always on my mind.

Chorus:
I'm sorry, so sorry
I Apoligize
didn't mean to hurt you.
I'm sorry, so sorry
for all my lies
didn't mean to hurt you.

Verse:
Why did you have to leave
before I realized
how much you meant to me

Chorus:
I'm sorry, so sorry
I Apoligize
didn't mean to hurt you.
I'm sorry, so sorry
for all my lies
didn't mean to hurt you.

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
Poetof-the-night
Junior Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 13

1 posted 2001-10-30 05:02 PM


Very good, making me think my thoughts of her...

"Don't think you can know you can"

Angelwings
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since 1999-08-27
Posts 222
IL, USA
2 posted 2001-10-31 12:37 PM


What a good song.  You know the saying.  You don't know what you got till it's gone.  That is a wonderful way to express your feelings.  Thanks for sharing.

If we're told we're bad, that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe if we are surrounded by beauty someday we will become what we see.

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