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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York 
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I wrote this because I am moving (litterally, I am writing this in a hotel along the way) and leaving my girlfriend behind. We really love each other, and thios poem was written to her. **************************************************** Leave Though I must leave you for a little while, I'll still think of you with a smile. Thoughts of you keep me warm, Memories of us keep me safe from harm. Though you may be far from me, Away from my heart never shall you be. New love may come and it may go, But you will always be my love, you know. Only for you does the heart in my chest beat, Without you, I would not be. Separated from you by distance far, Yet always together our hearts are. In my dreams frequently I see you, I wonder if you see me too? You are always right there, Connected by wires as thin as hair. I long to feel you in my arms, Holding you tight and safe from harm. The thought that together we may be someday, Gives me the strength to face each new day. Don't Drink and Park! |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
Awe I'm sorry you had to leave your g/f  things will get better don't wowwie  Very nice write keep smiling It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
Awe I'm sorry you had to leave your g/f things will get better don't wowwie Very nice write keep smiling It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Oh gosh....hun im sorry!!! Its hard leaving loved ones behind...It helps to write about it and get your feelings out there which your doing so im glad I enjoyed this poem...really reflected how you were feeling...nice job!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
Hey babe... ya its been awhile since i have read your work or anyone befor.. but you know how i feel on this subject i talk to you about all the time.. take care sweetie and im here for you and rememeber you can ALWAYS talk to me~! MUAH~! *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
A sad situation (?) Sorry but read_what_i_write is confusing me lol Well she seems supportive so don't worry man. And your poem was pretty good too. Theo |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Quite the sad situation, but you'll come through. I surely hope all works out. Good luck.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Distance won't ever keep two lovers apart!!! I wish you the best of luck in your situation, and I enjoyed your poem. ~*Nikki*~ ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
.......Rrrrrrrright.....I remember this...such a long time ago *sigh* hehe. see ya later...you already know my thoughts on this...obviously...lol. ~kiki~ I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now! |
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