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HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 08-17-2001
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LI, New York


0 posted 10-29-2001 10:48 PM       View Profile for HopelessRomanticGuy   Email HopelessRomanticGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HopelessRomanticGuy

I wrote this because I am moving (litterally, I am writing this in a hotel along the way) and leaving my girlfriend behind.  We really love each other, and thios poem was written to her.
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Though I must leave you for a little while,
I'll still think of you with a smile.
Thoughts of you keep me warm,
Memories of us keep me safe from harm.

Though you may be far from me,
Away from my heart never shall you be.
New love may come and it may go,
But you will always be my love, you know.

Only for you does the heart in my chest beat,
Without you, I would not be.
Separated from you by distance far,
Yet always together our hearts are.

In my dreams frequently I see you,
I wonder if you see me too?
You are always right there,
Connected by wires as thin as hair.

I long to feel you in my arms,
Holding you tight and safe from harm.
The thought that together we may be someday,
Gives me the strength to face each new day.

Don't Drink and Park!
Accidents may cause People!

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Honey
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since 10-09-2001
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1 posted 10-29-2001 11:27 PM       View Profile for Honey   Email Honey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honey

Awe I'm sorry you had to leave your g/f   things will get better don't wowwie  
Very nice write
keep smiling

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

Honey
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Hot girl From Canada


2 posted 10-29-2001 11:27 PM       View Profile for Honey   Email Honey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honey

Awe I'm sorry you had to leave your g/f   things will get better don't wowwie  
Very nice write
keep smiling

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs


3 posted 10-30-2001 10:39 AM       View Profile for xShUgArHiGhx   Email xShUgArHiGhx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xShUgArHiGhx's Home Page   View IP for xShUgArHiGhx

Oh gosh....hun im sorry!!! Its hard leaving loved ones behind...It helps to write about it and get your feelings out there which your doing so im glad   I enjoyed this poem...really reflected how you were feeling...nice job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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4 posted 11-09-2001 01:08 AM       View Profile for SunShine913   Email SunShine913   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SunShine913's Home Page   View IP for SunShine913

Hey babe...
ya its been awhile since i have read your work or anyone befor.. but you know how i feel on this subject i talk to you about all the time.. take care sweetie and im here for you and rememeber you can ALWAYS talk to me~!

MUAH~!

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*    

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5 posted 11-09-2001 01:52 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

A sad situation (?)
Sorry but read_what_i_write is confusing me lol  
Well she seems supportive so don't worry man.  And your poem was pretty good too.

Theo

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6 posted 11-09-2001 02:52 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Quite the sad situation, but you'll come through. I surely hope all works out. Good luck.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

vixengrl04
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since 04-26-2001
Posts 513
East Haddam, CT


7 posted 11-09-2001 07:03 PM       View Profile for vixengrl04   Email vixengrl04   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vixengrl04

Distance won't ever keep two lovers apart!!!  I wish you the best of luck in your situation, and I enjoyed your poem.  

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

WindSong
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Long Island, New York


8 posted 02-14-2003 11:27 PM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindSong

.......Rrrrrrrright.....I remember this...such a long time ago *sigh* hehe. see ya later...you already know my thoughts on this...obviously...lol. ~kiki~

I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now!
Today is yesterdays tomorrow.

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