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Teen Poetry #5

Give Me On Good Reason

AllThatGlitters4321
Junior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 45

0 posted 2001-10-29 09:11 AM

Give Me One Good Reason
why i shouldn't just up,
and leave you.
Im so tired of
all the *mess* you put me through.
Why waist my time
when i can find
a real man alot better than you.
I've put up with
your *mess* for far to long.
I've realized I loved you more
than you will ever love me
it has just taken me
this long to see.
You've been treating me bad,
I tell you im leaving,
and you play sad.
Give me one good reason
a second chance is needed
you told me you were done
messin' with other girls
I was all you needed.
Give me one good reason
why i should stay...I guess
it doesn't matter
what you say cause
none of your reasons
will matter im leaving anyway.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-10-29 10:15 AM

You should definately leave this guy if this is the way you feel!! You deserve to be HAPPY...not dealing with his *mess*...lol i liked that! ::hugs:: You'll find a happier life without him...strong piece!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2001-10-29 05:49 PM

ROCK ON!!!! WOO HOO!!! VERY powerful of you to do this, i wish i could have done the same thing instaed of letting myself get hurt! MAD props to you for this poem and your actions!
*Pixie*

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

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