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jytree
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since 2000-01-26

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0 posted 2001-10-29 12:52 PM

All my world rest upon her heart,
For she is my juleit,
My venus,
Only God could ever set us apart,

Her gentle glow warms my heart,
To know that we are together sets me apart
All our thought,
And all our dreams,
All wind up into our little scheme,

With the lives we share,
We are never unaware,
To the work of art we call love,

Love never tires,
Love never rest,
Love joins us together,
And we let life do the rest,

In my heart a place was alway waiting for u,
It just to a few years for you to know and pass on through,

Now as we sit,
and turn in for the night,
Our love burn on,
Ready for another day with you at frist morring light.

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-10-29 10:22 AM

How beautiful this was!!! The way you wrote this was so beautiful..i dont kno what to say!! great piece...

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

jytree
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omaha ark usa

2 posted 2001-10-29 02:26 PM

this was my first peace in awhile so I am glad you liked it

Skyfire

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3 posted 2001-10-30 12:01 PM

Awesome job! So incredible sweet!

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~Love me because I am Rhonda

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

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4 posted 2001-10-30 03:42 AM

yes I wrote it for my gf just to say simply that I love her I am glad you all like it

xShUgArHiGhx

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5 posted 2001-10-30 10:35 AM

I definately did like this one a lot jytree....im so happy to see you posting again...please continue!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

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6 posted 2001-10-30 03:08 PM

wow mike, glad to see you posting again. i liked this alot and hope ur gf enjoyed it as well. *hugs* miss talkin to u hun. see u later maybe
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

jytree
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Posts 336
omaha ark usa

7 posted 2001-10-30 03:34 PM

yea it is good to post again I hit a dry spell and thought I was going to lose my mind but here I am again and hi tiff!

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8 posted 2001-11-02 01:10 PM

hey jytree, good to see you stopping in.
I think you did beautifully on this poem. Very well written

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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