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hoppy
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0 posted 2001-10-28 09:20 PM



Standing in moon light
Your standing by
Tears bluring my sight
I hear you sigh
heart bleeding on my shirt
standing by the way side
cloths red and stained
you cast them aside

lost sight of my path
it's covered in dust
there's goes your path
all filled with lust

stubbling begging and bleeding
my heart and mind are compeating
one thought on my mind
one crack in my heart
will she ever come back
if not, i blame the art


---Written by:Hoppy


3-4-00

i could be bounded in a nut shell and count myself king of infinite space

© Copyright 2001 Hoppy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-29 10:18 AM


What an amazing piece..this has so much feeling in it. WoW...fantastic job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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2 posted 2001-10-30 12:00 PM


You blame the art, huh? Wow. Great jog on this one!

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3 posted 2001-11-04 08:12 PM


Fantastic poem I loved it!
  Lauren

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