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CLBinLOVE
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2001-10-26 10:22 PM


we walk into your room
and shut the door
we walk into our own place and time
and shut out reality
we hold each other
and the world melts away
and we are left standing
with a background of nothing
and a foreground of nothing
we leave everything behind
taken into another plane
a plane of blissful eternity
our place
we travel, arrive, reside, and leave
together
as one
when we kiss
nothing else matters
the touch of your lips, your body, your breath
all i feel, all i care about
nothing else matters
we are together, in our own world
noone else can break in
noone else can take what we have
i love you

"as below so above and beyond i imagine
drawn beyond the lines of reason
push the envelope, watch it bend"
--Tool

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Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

1 posted 2001-10-26 10:27 PM



"when we kiss
nothing else matters
the touch of your lips, your body, your breath
all i feel, all i care about
nothing else matters"
What more can I ask for?  
Te amo
Bel

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