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Zukene_Chic
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since 2001-09-26
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0 posted 2001-10-26 04:38 PM


I seem to have died
Have you noticed?
I lurk around the house
Just as silently as a ghost
Maybe I am dead
Could it be?
Thats normally what happens
When you live long enough

This one isnt so good. But if your smart, you'll get it. Take a guess at what the last line means!

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Knight of Secrecy
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since 2001-10-12
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1 posted 2001-10-26 05:17 PM


"Thats normally what happens
When you live long enough"

Truly a good poem, keep it up

-C.M.

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2 posted 2001-10-26 09:39 PM


This one's good! Family problems? If you need someone to listen, I'm at
spacebear_15@hotmail.com

Love me, because I am great (greater than Zu, anyway!)

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