Teen Poetry #5 |
I'm Hurting Too |
Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I'm hurting too no matter how happy I look It's okay to hurt Just don't become bitter because of me She's out there somewhere You're a great guy, I've just discovered I'm a commitment-phobic The world is yours, Mark Don't let this stop you I want to end it on a fairly good note... We didn't fight at all If we can be friends, great! If not, it's really too bad You're still taking me to prom though Let me know if you feel up to being friends Sorry, but I didn't want to start nagging at you at all It's been a good experience; thank you! Kudos to you, Mark!! Your friend, Rhonda |
||
© Copyright 2001 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved | |||
cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
hey you guys still get to go to your formal together! i liked this- felt like you were just speaking your mind. i know im a committment phobic...this is a nice way to end a relationship- peacefully. good stuff rhon |
||
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Well, I'm kinda in the same boat - I just recently broke-d up with my bf (beacause he wanted a life-long commitment, when I can't even commit to one hair color) Good luck on the friendship thing !!! ~ Tamma If I held a star everytyme he made me smile,I'd have the evening sky in my palm, if one was removed for every tear he caused, I'd be emptyhanded. [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 10-25-2001).] |
||
Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ahhhh a fellow committment phobe.... I feel ya on that. The best part... the one guy who can bring you out of that... now HE is worth his weight in gold. Great write, very straight-forward. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
||
anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice piece, Rhonada. It's amazing how many people are actually comittment phobic out there. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ Maybe I'm just a girl...interrupted. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |