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0 posted 2001-10-25 09:42 PM


I'm hurting too no matter how happy I look
It's okay to hurt
Just don't become bitter because of me
She's out there somewhere
You're a great guy, I've just discovered I'm a commitment-phobic
The world is yours, Mark
Don't let this stop you
I want to end it on a fairly good note...
We didn't fight at all
If we can be friends, great!
If not, it's really too bad
You're still taking me to prom though  
Let me know if you feel up to being friends
Sorry, but I didn't want to start nagging at you at all
It's been a good experience; thank you!
Kudos to you, Mark!!

Your friend,

Rhonda

© Copyright 2001 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-25 10:19 PM


hey you guys still get to go to your formal together! i liked this- felt like you were just speaking your mind. i know im a committment phobic...this is a nice way to end a relationship- peacefully. good stuff rhon  

         

"......",said the wise mute.

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2 posted 2001-10-25 10:19 PM


Well, I'm kinda in the same boat - I just recently broke-d up with my bf (beacause he wanted a life-long commitment, when I can't even commit to one hair color) Good luck on the friendship thing !!!

~ Tamma
      


If I held a star everytyme
he made me smile,I'd have the
evening sky in my palm, if
one was removed for every tear
he caused, I'd be emptyhanded.

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 10-25-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-10-26 07:57 AM


Ahhhh a fellow committment phobe....   I feel ya on that. The best part... the one guy who can bring you out of that... now HE is worth his weight in gold.  

Great write, very straight-forward.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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4 posted 2001-10-27 12:10 PM


Nice piece, Rhonada. It's amazing how many people are actually comittment phobic out there.

Thanks for the read.  

~AF~

Maybe I'm just a girl...interrupted.

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