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Can I Borrow A drop of love
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Can I Borrow A drop of love |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
" Can I borrow a drop of love " It´s not finished yet, but I just wanted to see what you, thought about it. Verse 1: Words can't do, for the way I feel inside, because I am always alone at night. I'm crying myself to sleep, seeing broken hearts in my dreams. What I am to do? Can't feel the moonlight in my eyes nomore, don't say It'll pass, I've felt this way before. Still lost after all these years, need a napkin for my sad tears. Chorus: Can I borrow a drop of love, can you leant me a bottle of, forever. A reflection of your love, would be much more than enough, forever. Can I borrow a drop...Of love. [This message has been edited by Hallucination (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is pretty.  Well done.Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is nice |
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