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hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2001-10-25 04:49 PM

I feel it but i won't let it near
i can't describe what i see
but i know that it's not real
i dance around the truth,
knowing the pain it will inflict.
in my mind i see visions
but i know none of it's real,
i'd tell you what i feel
but you can't understand
your not where i am
alone in a confused land
i wish you could understand my thoughts
but i can't let them go
so i keep my heart hidden
and my mind closed,
once i let my heart wonder
now i know not to let it go

i could be bounded in a nut shell and count myself king of infinite space

Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-10-25 04:56 PM

Nice poem, reminds me of something, don't know what.

-C.M.

Missthang
Member

since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

2 posted 2001-10-25 06:42 PM

call me dense but, i'm confused. are you talking about depression, a lost love and how you are afraid to give your heart to someone else, or what? as i was reading this i kinda thought of myslef. i to have a problem expressing what i feel, and i feel like no one can possibly understand me b/c they are "not where i am alone in a confused land". that was a great line. anyhoo, i like this one even if i didn't quite understand what your motives were for writing it. i put my own meaning to it and it was great. good job.

-ab

*The heart is a house for love*

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-10-25 09:29 PM

This one's really good! One of the best I've read from you yet! Keep it up!

It takes more work to love myself than to love others... I guess that explains it, eh?

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-10-26 10:11 AM

"i dance around the truth,
knowing the pain it will inflict.
in my mind i see visions
but i know none of it's real,"

Really amazing poem!! I relate to the lines above so well..i tend to dance in circles around the truth....i think a lot of people struggle with that...wonderful poem..liked it lots!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-10-27 12:42 PM

What an interesting piece. It can go into many different topics but the one I have in my head sounds good enough to fit it. Lots of emotion and the depth is incredible.

Well done on this. Remember to reply as well as post. Hope to see more.

~AF~

Maybe I'm just a girl...interrupted.

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