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the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-10-25 12:47 PM

There's nothing new under the sun
the sun rises and then the sun falls
to know that my life has just begun
and I hear the voice of death as it calls

The silent beauty of my childhood state
torn and twisted through out my development
now mangled in a twist of so called fate
left me bound to my own contentment

There's nothing new under the sun
the ebbing tide still flows the same
and there still a place that I run
where only one know's my name

The silent beauty of my childhood state
now found in a new purpose, in new light
no longer is my vision up for debate
I know the reason why I live in fight

There's nothing new under the sun
I still hear the voice of the king
telling me that my works not done
and let the words off my tongue ring

The silent beauty of my childhood state
the dreams the hopes and asperations
now found in His words so great
that I've changed my dedications

There's nothing new under the Son
He's still the sheperd and I the lamb
knowing He's the only one
that can be called the Great I am...

There's nothing new Under the Sun

we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2001-10-25 09:13 PM

Great to see something from you again!!! Wow. Awesome, powerful piece! Yay!

It takes more work to love myself than to love others... I guess that explains it, eh?

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-10-26 01:52 PM

I really enjoyed this piece!! great job

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-10-27 01:13 AM

I found this to be quite an excellent piece until I hit the last few stanzas. You completely lost my attention then.

~AF~

Maybe I'm just a girl...interrupted.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2001-10-27 09:14 PM

I'm tired so my brain isn't quite working... so bare with me here... I enjoyed it and claps to you for expressing your ideas honestly.

Fearlessness isn't living without fear, fearlessness is being afraid and still living.

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 10-27-2001).]

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

5 posted 2001-10-28 12:39 PM

great poem jimmy! i really liked it.

i'm just dumb!! i can't do nuthin right!

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