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Teen Poetry #5

Awaiting my liberty

K. Rebel
Junior Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 40
San Juan, PR

0 posted 2001-10-23 10:32 PM

I see the sun of dusk,
Look at it and it blinds me,
It enters my soul like a bullet
And awakens me.
Opens my eyes firmly
And enters into my heart,
It runs threw my veins
With a beautiful heat,
A volatile heat,
A heat of pleasure,
A heat I do not know.
I enter a glorious world,
I see what I want
And I want what I see.
I loose my mind
In this beautiful world of pleasure.
I forget that thundering bullet
That divides my soul,
I forget that incredible love,
That blinds me to frequent.
I forget that abyss,
In which I fall all the time.
I forget that battle
I lose day by day,
Trying to move my boneless body.
I think in nothing that will lose me,
I think in me,
And I lose my conscience.
I turn around,
I see a woman,
Precious and indescribable,
That revolves my mind,
That changes my thoughts,
That makes me think
In the dawn of a new day,
That soon will be here,
And will brighten my being.
I feel entertained for a moment,
And I return to my boring duties.
And I will soon see,
I only dream,
With a liberty
I will soon arrive.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-10-23 10:35 PM

hey..i enjoyed the imagery you played with in this- i could picture myself staring at the sunset and forgetting everything about my life, and then turning around and seeing that woman...and then going to sleep. i think you did a wonderful job with that danny- awesome piece poet....

"......",said the wise mute.

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