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~gretchenp34~
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since 2001-10-08
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Ohio, USA

0 posted 2001-10-22 08:30 PM



All the guys say
"she's so easy to get"
now I really know,
I'm just a bet.

But now I must quit
my lil game.
When I look at what I've caused
I feel so lame.

I'm just a trophy-
a real prize.
But now I must prove
that these guys are just lies.

Now I look
into my big mirror
I try to smile-
but all that comes out is a tear.

I'm better than that-
I'm not a slut.
I know I'm right,
its in my gut.

I'm just like this
because I lost the one I trust.
To gain that from others-
I did stuff, but I must.

Its the wrong way,
I need to turn my life around.
But to do that,
I need that one that I once found.
I wrote this in the summer.....i had some pretty bad situations goin on. but currently i have a boyfriend who wont treat me bad   so its all good now

Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart.  

© Copyright 2001 Gretchen - All Rights Reserved
pharon
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1 posted 2001-10-22 08:39 PM


wow...this hits so close to home for me. just remember you are more than a prize, no matter what you may feel like, or what stupid boys make you feel like....

              me

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2 posted 2001-10-23 05:02 PM


I'm glad you got a guy who will treat you right. You're not a trophy, you're a human being who deserves to be respected. And as for them saying you're a slut? Well, believe me, if they have absolutely nothing better to do with their lives than talk about you, then enjoy it! (and I do know where you're coming from, though)  

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

~gretchenp34~
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since 2001-10-08
Posts 46
Ohio, USA
3 posted 2001-10-23 05:25 PM


well im over that part of my life of being a slut.....i now have respect and if ur wonderin where i come from...i have a wonderful life, plenty of money, standout in sports (varisty as freshman), great friends, my family loves me. but the one problem is-im sortta sheltered in my family, so that does cause problems....and ive started gettin into some trouble, but ill be ok. thats where i come from
Honey
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since 2001-10-09
Posts 92
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4 posted 2001-10-23 06:02 PM


This one touched real close to home.  I hope your better now.  Always remember that when someone calls you an nasty name lift that chin up and smile   your better than that.

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

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