Looking Through Your Eyes (repost)

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Teen Poetry #5

Looking Through Your Eyes (repost)

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2001-10-22 08:25 PM

As I look into your eyes
I can see myself so strong
I can see a twinkle in your eye
I can tell that im a part of you
Its all too real
Looking through your eyes

As I look into your eyes
I can see me slowly fading away
I can see a tear in your eye
I can tell im going to disappear
Its all too real
Looking through your eyes

As I look through your eyes
I can see the glimpse of someone else
I can see that twinkle in your eye
I can tell im gone
Its all too real
Looking through your eyes

As I look into your eyes
I can see your happier
I can see a tear in your eye
I can tell that you know that I am here watching from above
Its all too real
Looking through your eyes

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2001-10-23 12:16 PM

this was great

love te repetition and the story told as you go. beautiful work

keep it up

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-10-23 12:59 PM

Great poem I loved it!
Lauren

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-10-23 05:04 PM

This one is so cool!!!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

4 posted 2001-10-23 05:59 PM

wow!!!! this one really touched me your a great writer.

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-10-24 07:46 AM

I absolutely LOVE poems about eyes, i think eyes are so magical and captivating and mysterious....you wrote beautifully in this poem. Eyes are the window to our soul...u can see so many things through then and i think u expressed that well here...great job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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