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AllThatGlitters4321
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since 2001-10-03
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0 posted 2001-10-22 03:44 PM


Why do you make me hurt so much.
To me you were the world,
and you made me think that i was your girl.
But you played me for a fool,
and i should of known.
When my friends said
that you were using me
like i was something new
that you'd like to try out,
and then just throw me away.
Well unlike your other girls
i caught on real quick....
Boy you thought you were slick.
I know more than you thought,
and your childish games
surely weren't bought.
I don't understand
i thought maybe you were ready
to settle down,
and become a real man...
But like the last time
i was wrong except now
I'm not so dumb,
and realized that i wasn't the only one.
Well just so you know
im done bein' part of your game.
It seems as though you lost,
and believe me you lost something great...
So when you get tired of actin'
like a kid just remember
that i won't be there,
and when someone breaks your heart
like you broke mine
remember that i won't
be there to care.

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Skyfire
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1 posted 2001-10-22 07:14 PM


Great read! Ooohhh, I really don't like players. They suck! Sounds like you're going to be fine, though, hun! Get over him, he sucks!!!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

Chel
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Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2001-10-22 08:18 PM


Great piece, a lot of emotion.  I liked the way you worded things.  It's all true.  Players suck, but at least you knew he was playing you.  Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

DancinQueen
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3 posted 2001-10-23 03:02 PM


great job~i especially liked the ending.way to stand up for yourself. keep posting!

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Honey
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since 2001-10-09
Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada
4 posted 2001-10-23 06:05 PM


Awesome write.  I've always said "If love isn't a game, then why are there so many players??"  Not all guys are like that you just gotta dig deep and look for the good ones.

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

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5 posted 2001-10-23 06:26 PM


I've been in this situation before - what a great way to put it into words

If I held a star everytyme
he made me smile,I'd have the
evening sky in my palm, if
one was removed for every tear
he caused, I'd be emptyhanded.

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
6 posted 2001-10-24 07:50 AM


Ugh GuyZ!!! They make me furious sometimes!!!!!!!!!! Im glad that you caught all of this before it got outta hand..its also good that u have good enough friends to warn you about what they see...sometimes we need to be told cuz we're  too busy on cloud 9 w/the charming prince to realize the ogar thats standing in front of our face..lol You tell him girl!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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