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DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

0 posted 2001-10-22 12:47 PM

Note:I cant say the title bc it is someone's name..and I know this doesnt flow even the slightest..but just work with me

It's so hard to see you and not want to kiss you
  Or hold you in my arms and fall asleep together
When I was with you, the world just faded away
  And the sad thing, I could see us, you and me,
  forever

Everything just clicked, it all felt so right
  I was so content, just looking at you made me
  smile
Speaking to each other without saying a word
  All of these things made our future seem
  worthwhile

All this time the warning alarm went off in my head
  Had I paid attention, I wouldn't be struggling
  today
To come to terms with the lies that forever reside
in my heart
  I'm feeling so much, but I have nothing left to
  say

Can we just be friends, because you know at one
point
  Something did connect, and something did bring
  us together
So you know me, I'll be here when you open your eyes
  And realize what we had, even if it takes forever

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-10-22 02:46 PM

We need to talk, I wanna know who exactly who this is for. Obviously, you don't want to say it here in pip. Nice to see you actually share something that you actually feel

Thanks for the beautiful read sweets. Talk to you later

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-10-22 07:12 PM

Aww, that's so sad! You'll get better, eventually! Great read!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-10-23 09:27 AM

Great free-verse style here. It didn't need to flow, it was written from your heart

That's the great part. I hope all works out for you.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-10-23 10:10 AM

Straith from your heart!
I like it.

Charisma

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

5 posted 2001-10-24 05:27 PM

I thought this was great, i really liked this i could relate to it, great job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

6 posted 2001-10-26 02:41 AM

thanks guys

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-10-26 01:58 PM

Its ok that u cant say the name i guesss.......now im all curious though lol..I enjoyed this poem even if it didnt rhyme...thats ok hun!!! lol nice to see a post from you, i wish you posted more often i always love reading your poems...good job hun

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

8 posted 2001-10-27 01:50 AM

It's acire!! loll..jk

Kiles, this isn't exactly boppy and lets dance around and be happy. You'll get by though with or without the aid of chocolate cake.

Thanks for sharing. I'll email you later on.

~AF~

"Live life to the fullest (unless you can't be stuffed)" - Merrick

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