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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419


0 posted 2001-10-21 07:16 PM



Verse 1:
Heal my hurts - Ease my pain
the rusty door won't open.
Say the words - Hide my shame
unchain my heart again.

Verse 2:
Please save me - From this madness
the heartaches won't stop.
I can't breathe - To much sadness
between us, Can't give up.

Chorus:
I need to hold your hand because I'm so scared.
I need the memories that we once shared,
to feel love again.
I need you here right now to make me feel whole.
I need a kiss from you to help my soul,
to feel love again.

Verse 3:
Promise me - You believe
that I won't stay this way.
Together - Forever
I'm down on my kness 'Cause...

Chorus:
I need to hold your hand because I'm so scared.
I need the memories that we once shared,
to feel love again.
I need you here right now to make me feel whole.
I need a kiss from you to help my soul,
to feel love again.

Please believe me when I say that...

Chorus:
I need to hold your hand because I'm so scared.
I need the memories that we once shared,
to feel love again.
I need you here right now to make me feel whole.
I need a kiss from you to help my soul,
to feel love again.

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
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1 posted 2001-10-22 12:54 PM


wow this was awesome! seriously..i cant beliveve no one's replied yet! Missin out!! I really really liked this..goin to my library. Wow..its beautiful and has so much emotion. Definetly going to look up some other stuff you've written. Keep it up!

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

LoneWolf
Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384
IL
2 posted 2001-10-24 05:31 PM


wow, i love this, its so awesome. keep up the great work

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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