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CAP
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 7


0 posted 2001-10-21 03:08 PM


Sorry if this bores you..

Ok im kinda in a messed up situation... Me and this girl have been talking to each other almost everyday and hanging out occasionaly. I think we both like each other but were afraid of what might happen if we get serious due to things i don't wanna discuss..i don't know what to do,idunno if i should give her this poem or not!!!
comments and suggestions plz

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What is the point of our relationship?
I’d like to think it’s more than a friendship
I try to give you hints and signs
But it’s no use, your heart declines

We talk to each other almost everyday
We have so much to say
You make me so happy when I’m with you
Even if it’s just to get info for the tattoo

I don’t care what anyone else thinks of us being together
We can make our relationship grow for ever and ever
I can’t avoid these feelings I have for you
No matter what I do or what I pursue

Each time you pass by
We smile and stare into each others eye
I just want to run up to you, and give you a hug and kiss
But I don’t know how you feel, because you always seem to reminisce

Why don’t you try and show me how you feel
Are you scared of the consequences, what’s the deal?
Just set your emotions and fears free
There is so much you and me can be

If you don’t have any serious feelings for me
As I do for you, then I will back off and let it be
But if you do, please just let me know
My heart has so many emotions I want to show

But I know when ever we are together we seem to have so much fun
I just want you to know you will always be my number one


[This message has been edited by CAP (edited 10-21-2001).]

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AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...
1 posted 2001-10-21 04:04 PM


This was soooooo great!!!
I know exactly how you feel, I'm in that exact position too.

I definately think you should give it to her!!

Good Luck!!

~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~

Missthang
Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103

2 posted 2001-10-21 06:08 PM


awwwww! this is soo sweet! i'm sure your special girl (your #1) will appreciate it regardless of if she feels the same way or not. so i don't think there is any harm in giving her this poem. if anything i think it will bring you closer. good luck and i hope things work out for the better.
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