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AllThatGlitters4321
Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45


0 posted 2001-10-21 02:07 PM


There's so much i want to say
when i look into your eyes
i want you to know all that i hold inside,
I sit and ask myself what am i doing wrong
i don't think you feel the same for me,
and it just hurts to see
why do you flirt and lead me on
if im not what you want
or is it just sometimes you act like
you don't like me
then sometimes I think you do
boy, im going crazy
tell me what's up with you.
Cause im sick of waiting
if in the end it's not gonna happen
cause as hard as it may
be i'll move on,
and find someone knew...
Cause im getting sick
of waiting here for you.

© Copyright 2001 *MeGaN* - All Rights Reserved
pharon
Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
1 posted 2001-10-21 04:41 PM


oh  mean, i hate that feeling...but be strong, if he likes you he'll quit stringing you along, and if he doesn't, maybe he wasn't worth your effort.  good poem, keep posting

            me

Missthang
Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103

2 posted 2001-10-21 05:59 PM


i really like the ending to this one. well said! i know exactly what you are talking about. to many "relationships" feel this way at the start. flirty friends can be fun but, true, that's not what you want. good job on this one, i liked it
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