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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
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Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-10-21 12:36 PM


Hey!  This is my newest, so I decided to post it.  lol  It's definitely not my greatest, but I also needed an excuse to show off my new picture.  lol  Anywho, let me know what you think.  

I HAVE

I have no reason to keep on
With my feelings for you
But to stop the love I have
Is something I cannot do

I have such little hope left
Of us riding off into the sunset
I’ve loved you for so long
I just can’t let you go yet

I have so much faith in you
That I know you’ll do what’s right
If being together is not our fate
I suppose that love is out of sight



      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 10-21-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 C.K.N. - All Rights Reserved
pharon
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alabama
1 posted 2001-10-21 04:43 PM


good job with this one (good picture too)  

         me

Missthang
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Posts 103

2 posted 2001-10-21 05:56 PM


i'm not usually one to post replies only cuz i never know what to say but i like this one! keep up the good work.
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3 posted 2001-11-02 10:01 AM


Cody,

you'll let go when you are ready to.  Don't force yourself to do something you're not ready to do yet.  Hope things do go well for ya.  Nice to read your work again.  Hoping to see more.

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-11-02 11:24 AM


Aww hun i hope things work out for ya..sounds like u really care for this chic...::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Skyfire
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5 posted 2001-11-02 03:53 PM


I have no reason to keep on
With my feelings for you
But to stop the love I have
Is something I cannot do

This is the best part in my opinion! Like acire said, don't force it. It just makes it worse, then it drags on and on and on and on for the next six months... When you're ready to let go, you will know it. Hugs!

PS> nice pic! What position do you play?

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

CwboyAtHeart
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6 posted 2001-11-02 07:17 PM


Thanks for the replys, ya'll.  

Rhonda - I pay both Offensive and Defensive Tackle.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

Skyfire
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7 posted 2001-11-03 01:33 AM


Right on! A football guy! *tries not to drool over Cody*

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

Wood_Stock
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since 2001-05-09
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The little yellow
8 posted 2001-11-03 06:44 AM


*Holds back the drool with ease* ... Maybe if I were a chick.... hmmmm.. lol.

How y'all doin?

Nice poem, I can't relate, still, it's a nice poem!

Is this site turning into a place for relationship advice?  he he... My 12month is coming up, got any "wild" suggestions?!  heh heh heh... (worth a try)

oh... "if people laugh at me..."(<-- your quote)  People laugh at me lots.. I think it's because I'm an idiot.. Hope that clears some things up for ya!

Until next time.

-Wood_Stock-

Honey
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Hot girl From Canada
9 posted 2001-11-03 06:11 PM


It wasn't your worst, I thought it was quite lovly.  Nice pic too by the way. ( I love football!!!)

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

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