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AngelShell
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not heaven nor hell so...

0 posted 2001-10-21 12:41 PM


And it’s a, Mustang Cherry when you’re not around to see it,
Mustang Cherry,
Hold me through the night,
Mustang Cherry,
I know that they don’t understand you,
Mustang Cherry---oohh---yes.

You slither in the darkness,
Form unfamiliar lies,
Sparkle in the daytime,
You heal the broken ties,
And all the time I see you,
Still I can’t quite see your face,
Trippin’ over hang-up’s,
That I made within this place…

And it’s a, Mustang Cherry when you’re not around to see it,
Mustang Cherry,
Hold me through the night,
Mustang Cherry,
I know that they don’t understand you,
Mustang Cherry---oohh---yes.

And when I’m old and faded,
You’ll stand here with me,
You won’t leave me haning’,
You’ll be my eyes to see...

‘Cause it’s a, Mustang Cherry when you’re not around to see it,
Mustang Cherry,
Hold me through the night,
Mustang Cherry,
I know that they don’t understand you,
Mustang Cherry---oohh---yes,
Mustang Cherry.

~I suppose I should really explain what 'Mustang Cherry' is.  'Mustang Cherry' is kinda like that 'thing' that you know is there but you can never really get a hold of it.  It's everything inside yourself that you love and hate.  It's not good nor bad, black nor white.  Whenever you made a good or bad decision you know it's there yet it's not a conscience.
That's really the only way I can explain it, so other than that, you'll all have to make your own minds up...~

~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~

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1 posted 2001-10-21 07:27 AM


I like your thoughts about "Mustang Cherry".



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2 posted 2001-10-21 06:12 PM


this is really really good.

for a long time i have been trying to express myself/write about something of this nature. Mustang Cherry just kinda explains it all. this piece really touched me in a way that i can't explain. it's awesome.

good job

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