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anonymous albert ?
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0 posted 2001-10-20 11:52 PM


[collaboration with chasing rain]
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Arwen:

Have we met?
Pieces of puzzles do not match.
I never heard of such a name
Nor do I,
Have a clue.
Though I’m curious...
On how you’re able to
Grasp the direction
Where I stay.
May I ask...who are you?

-Dorian

Ps. yes, dark does work best.

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1 posted 2001-10-21 12:06 PM


I had to read it twice just to make sure that I soaked it all up and I really liked it. I'm too tired to get really into it, but please take my word for it... it's great.. you two should be happy with this one.

There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for.

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2 posted 2001-10-21 12:21 PM


Cool again!!! I can't wait to read the rest of it!!!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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3 posted 2001-12-08 08:52 AM


Ooo this is such a good life poem, Albertia!! It's so philosophical, though, what else would I expect?

I'm off to read Leah's versin of events now so I'm sure the two of them will go very well together.

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.



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4 posted 2001-12-21 11:56 AM


I think I'm a little lost now

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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5 posted 2001-12-21 12:04 PM


Oh COOL!!! Yes! This is definitely something I'm gonna get into, you two. Don't keep me waiting toooo long.
  ~Carly

Speak softly and carry a beagle.

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught."
   ~Edouard Manet

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6 posted 2001-12-21 01:35 PM


Awesome !!!!!!! I really liked it...im definately gonna get into this!! hehehe

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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